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by Vince Gullaci   Feb 24, 2017


I inherited
my father and mother's
cherished furniture
a sparkling vibrancy
seems to have left
the shine
since my parents
passed away.

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  • 8 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Bitter sweet and thought provoking

    • 8 months ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thank you Milly,I'm chuffed to receive such a wonderful
      comment from you,
      Vince.

  • 8 months ago

    by yogi73

    short and sweet, but it really asks me to consider those that I have lost as well

    • 8 months ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thanks for the comment yogi73.I think it's every poets dream
      to write a poem that's universal.
      Vince

  • 8 months ago

    by Ren

    A wonderful write! Congrats on the win :)

    • 8 months ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thank you for the congrats Ren,lovely comment.
      Vince

  • 8 months ago

    by Brenda

    I really liked this a lot. It is so true, other people's possessions seem to lose their sparkle after they pass. Well done-

    • 8 months ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thank you Brenda,Great comment very insightful.
      Much appreciated,Vince.

  • 8 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A cutting piece.
    When people pass, the things they leave behind always seem to have a slightly unsettling air about them, don't they?

    Take care and all the best,

    Ben

    • 8 months ago

      by Vince Gullaci

      Thank you Ben for taking the time to comment on my poem.When
      parents pass away it is an unsettling time we have to deal with,
      Vince.

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