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by Vince Gullaci Feb 24, 2017
Life, society /
my father and mother's
a sparkling vibrancy
seems to have left
since my parents
by Milly Hayward
Bitter sweet and thought provoking
by Vince Gullaci
Thank you Milly,I'm chuffed to receive such a wonderful
comment from you,
short and sweet, but it really asks me to consider those that I have lost as well
Thanks for the comment yogi73.I think it's every poets dream
to write a poem that's universal.
A wonderful write! Congrats on the win :)
Thank you for the congrats Ren,lovely comment.
I really liked this a lot. It is so true, other people's possessions seem to lose their sparkle after they pass. Well done-
Thank you Brenda,Great comment very insightful.
by Ben Pickard
A cutting piece.
When people pass, the things they leave behind always seem to have a slightly unsettling air about them, don't they?
Take care and all the best,
Thank you Ben for taking the time to comment on my poem.When
parents pass away it is an unsettling time we have to deal with,
by CJ Maleney