Comments : Breathless

  • 7 months ago

    by Phil

    This is awesome and needs nominating, sorry I cant at the moment.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so very much Phil! I appreciate it! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    As Phil says, this needs nominating and I wish I could but I've been a little frivolous with my votes this week and am out already!

    Excellent work,

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much Ben!! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh I'm on it gentleman..... Ren, this beautiful!!!

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww wow! Thank you so much Andrea! I really appreciate it! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, amazing write! Darn it Andrea, you beat me to it, lol. ...

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Brenda! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Marvellous

    Within every scar, healing dwells. Understanding comes through some pain. It's through the crack, light penetrates. Lesson learned saves a future blame. There's always one out there, who cares. All that happens, tend towards win.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Marvellous! I appreciate your encouraging and insightful comment :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    Wow this is yet another beautiful write by you Ren.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you, Em! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by nani

    Ren,
    The use of imagery is incredible. The emotion within this poem hits me indirectly. What a great piece you did here!
    Keep writing girl!

    Nani

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much, Nani! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I can't really say much that has already been said, but I do have to say the imagery in this write is outstanding, really diggin the format too, totally drawn in from the first line, great job!!

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and your awesome comment, Ben! I really appreciate it :)

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    I really felt her struggle and here dilemma to catch her breath. The fresh and new version of the biggest question: To be , or not to be.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and for your comment, Frank! :)