Comments : Broken Heart, Clinging Memories

  • 7 years ago

    by Brenda

    So true, so very true. We write, we write for all the good things and the bad that happen in our lives. Well done-

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    "Writers,
    We all have the same purpose,
    We want the world to see our mind,
    See our thoughts that we don't show,
    We all just want to be heard,
    But what happens when we're broken,
    We keep writing,
    So no one can see how truly broken we are,
    Externally that is,"

    ^^
    Wow...these first few lines are everything! I love this! There is so much raw truth in your writing that you shed some much needed light on. Whether it's good or bad...such as finding new love or getting our hearts broken... writing is our passion... and the one outlet and vice we can turn to over and over again.

    Fantastic job and well done!

  • 6 years ago

    by Lucifer

    Yes, you are right, but for me, it's a bit different, I wrote about others stories. Mostly, about the people I meet in daily life, but at the same time each one of us shares the same emotions.

    When we are hurt, we cry; when we are loved, we smile.

    But the process is the same just as you described in this poem. I write their feelings on my iPad.. And try to give them the shape of a poem.