LIFE (Depression Acrostic)

by Kryptonite Dreamer   Mar 4, 2017


Living in someone's image
Intensely having self hatred from others
For each day, not wanting out of bed
Energy depleting, even when others care

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  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    It has happened with me.
    It didn't like to want out of the bed.
    I was lost for almost an year, until love found me.

    Another good write.

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    So true. Love this.

  • 9 months ago

    by Shruti

    Sad, yet the truth about depression, a diffulcut part of life.
    Great write!
    I'd like to suggest something, if you don't mind...
    `Intensely having self hatred from others`
    ^ I think here you can make it only `hatred` instead of `self hatred`; because if it's self hatred, then it won't be from others...I guess. Or you can make it something like `self hatred because of others`.
    It's just my opinion.
    And this is anyway a good piece, well and nicely written. I love it. :)
    ~S

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