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  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Firstly, may I just say a warm welcome to the site. Secondly, can I commend you on a thoroughly well written and original first post. Dark and brooding, this really is very good writing.
    I look forward to reading more of your work

    All the best,

    Ben

    • 4 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      I'd like to agree with Ben. This is a great piece.

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    I liked this a lot. A sad write with really good rhyming through-out. Well done-

  • 9 months ago

    by Marvellous

    Silence whispers that we may think. Isolation is hall of find. In quietness, clues are unveiled. Excellent rhyming, acknowledged. Keep inking and don't stop thinking!
    Welcome aboard to the poets' home..