Firstly, may I just say a warm welcome to the site. Secondly, can I commend you on a thoroughly well written and original first post. Dark and brooding, this really is very good writing.
I look forward to reading more of your work
Silence whispers that we may think. Isolation is hall of find. In quietness, clues are unveiled. Excellent rhyming, acknowledged. Keep inking and don't stop thinking!
Welcome aboard to the poets' home..