Comments : The Lips

  • 9 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi Frank'
    I like this poem...the last stanza kick the bucket...you express it well.

    Good job..

    Gel

    • 9 months ago

      by ddavidd

      thank you dear Gel

  • 9 months ago

    by Hellon

    Your writing seems familiar to my eyes and, your words familiar to my ears :) Lovely flow...just like honey!

    Hopefully I'll remember to nominate this one when I get my votes back :)

    • 9 months ago

      by Ren

      You beat me to it! Thank you for nominating! :)

    • 9 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you Hellon. There is a source of relief that you found a sense of familiarity in my words.

  • 9 months ago

    by Ren

    Frank,
    Your word choices in this captivating poem are just extraordinary! Such vivid imagery used to depict a sensual scene, indeed. Well done!

    • 9 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dear Ren

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Yes, you write in a very familiar style...

    Well done on this.

    • 9 months ago

      by ddavidd

      It is a great source of comfort that you and Hellon found some sense of familiarity in my words.

  • 9 months ago

    by Em

    Fantastic

  • 9 months ago

    by Brenda

    I really liked this a lot. Your words flowed beautifully. Well done-

    • 9 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you Brenda

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Familiarity...they got it! It is this familiarity that I come searching for your poems and come tumbling on real gems! It is the familiarity that is Frank's.

    No words for the poem. It is too much for me to handle or to describe. :-)