Comments : Love's Death

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Gel,

    This was going along so nicely and then 'BAM!' - the end whacked me 'round the face, lol

    Well done on this,

    Ben

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    A beautifully sad, heart breaking poem of the many ups and downs of love.

    "Love is not something we say
    It's the action we do the whole day"
    ^^
    I love these two lines. There is much truth in the saying "Actions speak louder than words".

    Well done, Gel!

    • 7 years ago

      by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

      Thanks Ren for having a time reading this. ..and also thank you for the comment