If I'm Honest

by Britt   Mar 10, 2017


The truth stops at the tip of my tongue
and I can't help but let it linger there
unable to bring myself to let reality
shine it's light -
It's cruelty, I know,
to let feelings fester on the verge
of heartache.

But how can I ever tell you?

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  • 5 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    This poem grabbed my attention from the very start, most poems fizzle out after that but yours stayed strong to the very end. The title is strong as well which adds to the impact of this emotional piece. Much has been conveyed in this short but well-constructed poem. Well done

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What an honest, beautiful write. Well-deserved win.

  • 8 months ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write!
    Congrats on the win!

  • 9 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    to let feelings fester on the verge
    of heartache.

    ^^More then feelings that causing the heartache its the
    truth which is failed to be known causes more pain. Sometimes
    we like someone too much that we try to protect them by not
    telling the truth but, it will hurt them more and you when they do
    come to find out that you have known yet failed to say.

    Honesty is a bigger responsibility and burden then just
    been responsible for something...hope that made sense.

    Congrats on the win :)

  • 9 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written. Congratulations on your well deserved win x

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