Comments : If I'm Honest

  • 7 months ago

    by Phil

    I like the mysterious feel to this. So many questions to ask... What are you trying to say? I think its something to do with love. Why can't you say it? You're afraid of the consequence, yes? Or something deeper? Hope it receives recognition. PW

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    I can almost feel your frustration in this piece, Britt.

    Well written,

    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    Fantastic piece!!

  • 7 months ago

    by yogi73

    this poem really draws me in and leaves me wanting more. congrats on the win

  • 7 months ago

    by Em

    So glad this has got front page. An astounding win. Take care, Em

  • 7 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    This is Epic. Congrats on the win it is well deserved.

    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Poetess

    Congrats on the win.

    I need to read more of your stuff.
    It's so much said in such short words

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautifully written. Congratulations on your well deserved win x

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    to let feelings fester on the verge
    of heartache.

    ^^More then feelings that causing the heartache its the
    truth which is failed to be known causes more pain. Sometimes
    we like someone too much that we try to protect them by not
    telling the truth but, it will hurt them more and you when they do
    come to find out that you have known yet failed to say.

    Honesty is a bigger responsibility and burden then just
    been responsible for something...hope that made sense.

    Congrats on the win :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Fantastic write!
    Congrats on the win!

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What an honest, beautiful write. Well-deserved win.

  • 3 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    This poem grabbed my attention from the very start, most poems fizzle out after that but yours stayed strong to the very end. The title is strong as well which adds to the impact of this emotional piece. Much has been conveyed in this short but well-constructed poem. Well done