I like the mysterious feel to this. So many questions to ask... What are you trying to say? I think its something to do with love. Why can't you say it? You're afraid of the consequence, yes? Or something deeper? Hope it receives recognition. PW
^^More then feelings that causing the heartache its the
truth which is failed to be known causes more pain. Sometimes
we like someone too much that we try to protect them by not
telling the truth but, it will hurt them more and you when they do
come to find out that you have known yet failed to say.
Honesty is a bigger responsibility and burden then just
been responsible for something...hope that made sense.
This poem grabbed my attention from the very start, most poems fizzle out after that but yours stayed strong to the very end. The title is strong as well which adds to the impact of this emotional piece. Much has been conveyed in this short but well-constructed poem. Well done