Comments : Unspoken

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    Nominated for sure!!

    Take care x

  • 6 months ago

    by Aries Rising

    Nice to see you here, I told you you would love it,

    Finally a place where people as random as you and I seem to fit. Be warned it's bloody additive and you get lost in the reading.

    Before you know it's it's one in the morning

    Craig x

  • 6 months ago

    by Nicko

    Wow great poem and already nominated for the weekly contest I see. Strong title, good rhyme and meter. A nice emotional piece and worthy of the nomination, I think we could be seeing more of your poems nominated in the future.

  • 6 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh this hits me in the gut....what a heart gripping rhyme this is. Happy its nominated!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Loved this, a raw honest write that tells how far you have come-thank you for sharing this-well done-

  • 6 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Thank you all so very much. Apologies for lack of response currently unwell & having a pity party lol xx

  • 6 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Thanks everyone for the feedback & nominations, really appreciated :) xx

  • 6 months ago

    by Courtney Hough

    This is gorgeous and so very relatable. Thanks for writing it.

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    This is such a beautiful piece and very well written! Congrats on the win!

  • 5 months ago

    by DarkLight

    Healthy piece. keep up the voice and let the words be known.

  • 4 months ago

    by Fredy

    Great piece!

  • 2 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    Even though the repetition was a little but overused in this piece it manages to stand out among the others that have been nominated this week. The author has beautifully blended a great mixture of tones and textures in this piece. The flow is wonderfully smooth and the word choice is rough in just the right ways to express how this person feels about growing up and moving on from some darker days. There is a much more personal aspect of this piece than most of the others this week and I think that this one provides great contrast on both that front and the front of having a little more structure (or well done structure). For a fairly new poet to the site, Lyrical Madness has definitely gained fans from this piece.

  • 2 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    Great poem and my top pick for this week’s contest. Excellent rhyme and meter. What I really enjoyed was the way the rhyme flowed, nothing was forced this enabled the message to shine through without being distracted. The stanzas were concise and well constructed, once again emphasizing the message and emotion that you want to convey. Well done