Comments : naturally,

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a wonderful little piece of poetry and that last stanza really is a gem.
    Nominated.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I love this especially the 2nd stanza which really stands out.

    Very captivating

    Craig

  • 7 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    LOVE THIS!!

    Nice to see something from you again, I really love the sentiment in this write your phrasing is first class and your imagery is excellent!

    "either way, it’s solitude.
    there is no exchange
    of pleasantries or poetries;
    no doors to be unhinged."

    ^^^^^ freaking awesome.

    Ben