Comments : Bullfighting

  • 7 months ago

    by Hellon

    Very descriptive and, sadly, very true. I've been to one bull fight and it still makes me sick when I think of it.

    Lances pierce;
    the excruciating pain pours,
    and satisfaction fountains,
    blood!

    ^^^

    Horrific ending.

    Nominated!

    • 6 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you so much dear Hellon for your words and for the nomination. You are quite supportive to new members and that speaks volume about your personality. It is indeed a horrific sport.

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is very good indeed. You seem to be able to pull wonderful imagery out of thin air and it's a pleasure to read.

    As Hellon says, a sick 'sport' that should be outlawed everywhere.

    All the best

    • 6 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dear Ben and you are right it should be outlawed.

  • 7 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Dude this is amazing and captures the horror of this so called sport. I watched it on TV once, it sickened me.

    Very well written

    Craig

    • 6 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dear Aries and you are on the money about the horror of this so called sport.

  • 7 months ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    This was a well written poem and one that brings home the horrors of bull fighting. I'm sure if we had our way, we would all want to see the end of this barbaric sport.
    The poet put into words so very well, the awful descriptive detail and painful ultimate death that the bull has to endure, just to bring some sort of perverted pleasure to those that watch it.
    A good write albeit a sad one.

    • 6 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Dear PETER, I could not agree more with you in this regard (100%). Thank you so much for the compliment.

  • 5 months ago

    by Fredy

    Goosebumps while reading! Wow that hasn't happened in a while, great job... fabulous description of a cruel act.... great job

  • 3 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    One of the great things about reading poetry is the different topics that sometimes come to the fore. What a great topic to write about! It brings together the horrors of a sport (if you can call it that) that is adored my millions at humanities based level, blood and killing, that is abhorred by millions more for the total inhumanity of it. But more about the poem, a great write, great word choice and alliteration. You have used some very descriptive lines like “vampires with erectile excitements” that adds punch and imagery, a very good strong poem. Job well done.

    • 2 days ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you dear Nicko for the vote and wonderful comment.
      Thank you Milly and Fredy

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Sorry I haven't been on for a while so almost missed this gem. What vivid imagery about a cruel dark sport a well written piece that raises awareness of the pain and suffering relished by evil sadists