Comments : Earth mother-line unit palindrome

  • 7 years ago

    by Em

    Fantastic Brenda as always xx

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Em, thank you so much-you really have to try one of these one of these days-

  • 7 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Brenda,

    You know what I think of these forms and I can only admire you for writing them. This is wonderful stuff. Artistic, if you don't mind me saying!

    Take care,

    Ben

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Ben. I am trying to get better at these, One day I want to do an epic one. I really do appreciate your kind words.

  • 7 years ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Brenda,
    Fantastic!! Well done on writing such a hard style of poetry.. :)
    the content is also amazing!

    Well done..

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Nams, I appreciate you! Hugs-

  • 7 years ago

    by ddavidd

    you are right . We internalize their sins and project it to our children. Nicely put!

    • 7 years ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Frank, I appreciate your thoughts-