This speaks volumes. At first I was reminded of myself with old toys. I saw this in a literal sense. Then the last two verses, I was like, "well then...". Definitely something that makes readers think.

Just one thing, the 5th stanza
"Was is it what we did, or said?"
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Small typo?

Well thought out, great work

not the most informative of comments ill admit but i freakin love your writing craig there are times when your metaphors are so good that i question myself if i'm getting it right, the crazy thing about it is that even if i don't and take the words at face value and not metaphors the poem is still epic.

I hope that makes sense, i realise my comments are a little like drunken swing ball sometimes - all over the shop.

all the best fella

Ben