Comments : Evade This Void

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A nice use of language and some good rhyming in what is a very dark write indeed.

    Well written, all the best,

    Ben

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    So very relateable

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    I liked this a lot. It's dark and as Em says, very relatable. Really good use of rhyming and flows well.

    • 2 years ago

      by Nicolette

      Thank you! I'm not convinced it flows very well yet, might try and edit it later on if I have any ideas.