Comments : Letters of love (Somonka)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Naomi,

    I'm so glad you posted this even though you beat me in completing Ben's challenge, lol.
    As far as I can tell, this has all that this form requires and is thoroughly well written.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    N, this is beautiful and is a refreshing change from your recent work and definitely relatable for many of us as we've all been there, lost in someone so much that we may think it's love when infact it's just pure lust if that makes sense. I like how you've tried a new form too. Simply beautiful.

    Title: It may be a simple one but powerful, sweet and links nicely with the form and content.

    1/ Firstly, I like this opening straight to the point of love that you have written this for one persons eyes only and thats the person you live, the one who has supported you throughout the hard times and loved you through them too because without this person you'd have very little or at least feel that way. And for your info I dont think its cheesy, sweet but not cheesy lol. I think I need to go back to sleep, I kept reading the last line as 6 syllables haha but it's fine!!

    2/ This is perfection and I know (if it's who I think it's about) that you love him very much and who wouldn't after him sticking around when others didn't.

    A new form done fantastically well.Also, I read bens comment, I need to go check other bens challenge. Em x

  • 6 months ago

    by Phil

    This is lovely.

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is lovely and he's a lucky guy

    Craig

    • 6 months ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Craig - however I feel im the lucky one he stuck around for so long and put up with me!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Awww, Nams, this is lovely! What a beautiful write for your love-so sweet! Hugs-

  • 6 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Beautiful features! Love the wording! Beautiful!!!

  • 1 month ago

    by Lucifer

    He really is lucky to have you by his side.

    • 1 month ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      I see it more as i am lucky to still have him.. thank you