Comments : A Midnight Storm

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ren,

    This is excellent. The rhyming and descriptive prowess you show really are a pleasure to read here.

    Well done and all the best,

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Ben! :) I always appreciate your comments!

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Ren

    Beautifully expressed peice. A joy to read

    Michael :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thanks so much Michael! I appreciate it! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Lvi

    Your detailed descriptions flow smoothly and this is beautiful...

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Phil

    This is fantastic

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you Phil! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Love this so much, storm nature and passion.

    Fire lit within, with this one

    Amazing writing yet again

    Craig

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you Craig!! I am glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, wonderfully written storm write. I loved the rhyming throughout and your descriptives are spot on, well done-

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Brenda!! :) I really appreciate it!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Everlasting

    ReAlly good imagery.
    Thanks for sharing.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by nani

    WOW!!! This poem is incredible Ren!!! What powerful first words you used:

    "A beat comes to earth,
    With a soft rhythm or two,
    That brushes along the trees-
    A dance to ensue"

    This gave me chills!!! Keep posting!

    Nani :)

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Nani :) I truly appreciate your kind words!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Shruti

    Wuu...such a lovely beautiful write...!! I can visualize each word so well. The sound of rain...the thunder...brings a so peaceful feeling. I really love the mention of porch chimes, doors rattling...
    Love love love it!
    :)
    ~S

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much Shruti!! I'm glad you enjoyed it! Thanks so much for reading and commenting! Take care :)

  • 6 months ago

    by zvikov

    Hmm.... Just read this poem - don't know why but I ket feeling a powerful sense of some place forgotten.
    Good write

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      I can definitely understand getting that feeling while reading this. Thank you so much for reading and commenting! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by pmmurphy

    This is beautiful. Simply beautiful.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Tony

    This is definitely a favorite. Love the imagery, the quick rhythm, and the way it builds as you read it. You have the gift of storytelling, that many lose when they rhyme. The more I read the more I like.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Tony!! Glad you liked it :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Poetess

    Absolutely in love with this

    • 5 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much!! :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Fredy

    Amazing piece!

    • 5 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you!! :)

  • 5 months ago

    by ddavidd

    There most be a strong connection between music, painting and poetry, because I can hear the thunder, rain, as I can imagine the vision you portrait so wonderfully, out of your windows.
    Thank you so much Ren, for the wonderful person that you are.

    • 5 months ago

      by Ren

      Wow Frank!! Thank you so very much for those amazingly sweet and kind words!! :) you are wonderful!

  • 5 months ago

    by Hope

    I feel the storm inside the heart, great poem. Keep writing.

    • 5 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much!! :)

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Nice ink Poetess :) really atmospheric.
    Almost found myself wishing it was raining here and a storm brewing.
    I find then incredibly energising.
    PPx

    • 5 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Paul!!! I really appreciate it! I find them energizing as well. A cloudy day with thunder and rain is my favorite kind of day :) thanks for reading and commenting!!!

  • 5 months ago

    by Hope2932

    I love thunder and lightening storms and now I love them even more!!!

    • 5 months ago

      by Ren

      Wow thank you so much!!! :) I really appreciate it!! Glad you enjoyed!!

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    I love thunder storms.

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Me too girl. They are my favorite :)

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Oh Cowgirl...this is beautiful. I don't like thunder storms...but I seem to do now! It's a really amazing write!

    • 2 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much beautiful Lady <3