Wuu...such a lovely beautiful write...!! I can visualize each word so well. The sound of rain...the thunder...brings a so peaceful feeling. I really love the mention of porch chimes, doors rattling...
Love love love it!
This is definitely a favorite. Love the imagery, the quick rhythm, and the way it builds as you read it. You have the gift of storytelling, that many lose when they rhyme. The more I read the more I like.
There most be a strong connection between music, painting and poetry, because I can hear the thunder, rain, as I can imagine the vision you portrait so wonderfully, out of your windows.
Thank you so much Ren, for the wonderful person that you are.