Comments : The Battle

  • 7 years ago

    by Ren

    Another deep and heavy write from you here. A smooth, consistent flow and great rhyming really emphasize the utter heartbreak that weighs heavily on every word. Once again, my heart feels for you. These are not easy or pleasant emotions to carry-they can be such a heavy burden and make life seem hopeless- but you never have to carry them on your own. Please know you are not alone, and feel free to reach out to me anytime! Take care and keep moving forward- one step at a time.