Comments : I Shall Wear Midnight

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I shall wear midnight is a book in the disc world series by the late Terry Prattchet.

    Rest in peace you hilarious genius

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    An add on to this,

    Terry Prattchet is one of my favorite authors. He got the funny side and serious side of everything.

    He made his fantasy fit reality. No other author has managed such in such a remarkable way.

    Over time, and it will take a long time, I'm going to write something for every tittle.

    That man, who I have never met and unfortunately never will has given me smiles through dark times.

    I repay a debt.

    A.R

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    This is a wonderful write, Craig, and beautifully written! The title, the content, and the amazing imagery are fantastic!! Awesome job :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Hellon

    There's something about this poem that has drawn me in and, after several reads I'm still not sure what it is...perhaps it's what you haven't said (yet) that got my attention..still not sure haha!!

    I think it could do with some more punctuation...normally I'm not a lover of too much but there are times when it helps to direct the reader to a pause in order to digest what has been said...

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      You can't win with punctuation.

      Sometimes I don't use any at all especially with rhymes. And you get criticised for such lol.

      It was necessary for this piece to make it read the way I thought it

      Regards

      Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    This is captivating- great work x

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    What a great impression: "I Shall Wear Midnight"

  • 6 months ago

    by Poetess

    Amazing.

    I should probably say more, but I've read it 6 times and I'm not sure I'm done!

    • 6 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Glad you like.

      It's a flight of fantasy I guess but does have meaning, well to me anyway.

      Craig

  • 1 month ago

    by mossgirl19

    Amazing and dreamy all at once. Loved it.

    • 1 month ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Amazed you found this one tucked away in the depths.

      It's short and sweet but it's one I rather like and I'm glad you do too.

      Craig x