Comments : The Room

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    Frank! Another amazing write by you! The imagery in this- just WOW! Fantastic job, as always!

    • 7 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you so much dear Ren for your warm words and support.

  • 7 months ago

    by pmmurphy

    This reads like a poem that is simply beautiful. It feels like your describing a scenerary to me.

    • 7 months ago

      by ddavidd

      It somehow is dear pmmurphy. Thank you for the compliment.

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    The room has some view it just appeared in my mind as
    I read it..I liked how you positioned each object giving it time
    and space and taking time to describe it. Yes somewhat a painting
    of "The Room"...nice!

    • 7 months ago

      by ddavidd

      thanks dear Meena for seeing that surreal painting.

  • 7 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Really love this Frank, you use great control with the structure of this write and your word choice is spot on, very vivid visuals that just "pop" in to the readers head immediately.

    Wonderful writing

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by ddavidd

      Thank you so much Ben I am glad you think this way.

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Vivid descriptions...I love how even the cats are positioned right there! Everything in the room is so alive, thanks to your great choice of words.

  • 5 months ago

    by Nicko

    judging comment

    I was enchanted by this poem on first read, after the third or fourth reading I knew it was in my top three. In your previous comments painting and surreal were mentioned, surreal is what jumps out at me, an old worldly painting almost, capturing moments forever that a photo never could. I like that you have inserted yourself within this image in the third stanza but what won me over the most is the seductive last stanza, it hit me between the eyes. Great finish to great read.