Comments : Why Do I Love You?

  • 1 year ago

    by pmmurphy

    I love rhyming poems alot. Especially ones that flow well. This also holds good value to like modern day language. It was a fun read :)

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      Thanks Murphy. I don't write anything that doesn't rhyme. I have a pathological need for order and symmetry. Also finishing things. And my poems dont feel RIGHT unless they RHYME. Its a sickness :'D

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    First of all, welcome to the site! :)

    From the looks of it, I have much to look forward to with your writing.

    This is such a sweet and excellent write! Your rhyming is smooth and a joy to read, and you have some great imagery as well!

    "How can a reason for this phenomenon exist? Like a lake before the sunrise the definition is shrouded in mist."

    ^^
    THIS...this is amazing!!

    Well done!

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      I am stationed in Korea right now, one thing this country has in spades is mist. Every morning thick and heavy fog rolls in and doesn't clear until noon. The image stuck with me.

  • 1 year ago

    by Sive Klaas

    I've been looking for this piece of writing. I finally found it. Thank you. Keep it up.this is awesome

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      Thank you. I have been looking for the words to this poem for 18 years, directly relates to my other poem "The One that Got Away."

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    I love the layout of this piece Tony. How you have asked a question then answered it. Well done.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This was a sweet poem with excellent rhyme. The ending is so raw and honest, just the real thing. I feel you when you asked if there is a reason for such a phenomenon. I have been asked the same question and I answered with your very words! Great write!

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      Thank you for the heartfelt comment and the time you took to read.

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Fantastic work Tony

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Tony this is superb. I love the rhyming the visuals and the emotions conveyed just beautiful. An amazing piece that is one of the best romantic pieces I've read in a ling time

  • 8 months ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    beautiful.... love the rhyme and how you describe love.

    very well done :) This one is getting my nomination for this week! :D

    • 8 months ago

      by Tony

      Thank you Olwin, I've always written better when I write from the heart. And she's held mine since the day we met.

  • 8 months ago

    by Courtney Hough

    This is a truly adorable heartfelt write! I'm so happy i stumbled onto it Tony:) What a special bond love is.

    • 8 months ago

      by Tony

      Yes, it is. It means a lot to me that this is still touching people a year after I posted it. Thanks Courtney : )

  • 7 months ago

    by Allen Harriet

    that answer is very funny

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben

    oi oi fella.....I have to say that i love this write, straight from the heart with some wonderful rhymes and imagery.

    Awesome :)

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Tony

      Thanks Ben