Comments : While You Slumber

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Beautiful, Craig!! Your imagery is gorgeous and there's also a refreshing enthusiasm in this...I love it! Well done! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by pmmurphy

    This is sooooo soothing to read. Very meditative. Much enjoyed :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    So darn pretty!!!!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, well done on this. To watch the sun rise and nature wake up is truly lovely. You really did a wonderful job with this.

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thank you for your comments guys.

    Was just a simple thing I wrote while sitting on my window ledge watching the day break

    Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by Lvi

    Craig

    You really throw a beautiful light on these little things
    and the positive side of not being able to sleep.
    Awesome !

    Lvi

  • 6 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    A really beautiful write x

  • 5 months ago

    by Fredy

    Really like this piece

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    The honesty in this piece is heart-warming. You were looking at the dawn of the day and wrote this while sitting...pen in hand...the picture of that moment in a poet's life.