Comments : The One that Got Away

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    Love the rhyming in this poem! Well done on another beautiful write!

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Well done on this piece. I hope shes still reading them..

  • 1 year ago

    by Alec

    So all these are about the same person? 18 years is a long time to hold all of that in bro. Maybe its time to move on? From the sounds of things she has... There's more than one type of romance out there. This star crossed Romeo thing is just going to hurt you in the long run.

    • 1 year ago

      by Tony

      Yes, they are. Yes it is. Don't know how to move on, wouldn't want to if i did. I love her, always have and always will. I'd rather be Romeo than Fabio, the whole ''pop the leash'' and chase her mentality is a little broken to me.

    • 1 year ago

      by Alec

      Broken Fabio?! Lmfao touché!

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Favorite straight away, I'll content more when I've time

    Craig

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Beautiful and close to my own heart for different reasons

  • 9 months ago

    by Hales

    It is so easy to connect to each poem I read from you. This is heart wrenching yet beyond beautiful.

    • 9 months ago

      by Tony

      Thanks Hales,

      I needed an outlet and this seamed as good a place as any. I'm glad you are enjoying

      : )

  • 9 months ago

    by Phoenix ¥

    What a beautiful poem - you have a great talent for connecting with the audience and sharing your pain. Thank you x

  • 8 months ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Beautiful and sad! :/ Tore at my heartstrings.
    So beautifully written and expressed <3
    Bravo