Comments : Dejected Diction

  • 6 years ago

    by ddavidd

    I find this piece very powerful and well written. Such powerful wording and imagery!

    • 6 years ago

      by Aegis

      Thank you so much:) This was one of the most challenging pieces I've put together yet. Most of my poems are written in the span of a few minutes or hours, but this one took multiple attempts over a week or two. I even changed it last second before I posted it on here. Honestly, I considered removing it due to the lack of attention it received, but now I'm feeling much better about it!

  • 6 years ago

    by beyouplur

    :(