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by Naughtymouse Apr 21, 2017
Love, romance /
that feel like seconds,
time is getting shorter,
how I wish
I could stop time,
and last dance with you forever.
Ben, this is really lovely...
Thanks for reading and commenting guys, as always, I appreciate your time :)
This is one reason why we need to tell those close to us that we love them as often as possible because none of us are getting any younger.. Killer piece.
"And last dance with you forever"
That line made me read everything differently. I think sometimes we don't realize just how fast time slips by until there are no more last dances.
Wow Ben. This is wow.. i guess we all have a moment where we look at someone and start to wish we could freeze time with them.. well done on this piece
by Ben Pickard