It Goes Too Quick

by Naughtymouse   Apr 21, 2017


Hours pass,
that feel like seconds,
time is getting shorter,
how I wish
I could stop time,
and last dance with you forever.

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  • 5 days ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, this is really lovely...

  • 5 days ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Thanks for reading and commenting guys, as always, I appreciate your time :)

  • 1 week ago

    by Phil

    This is one reason why we need to tell those close to us that we love them as often as possible because none of us are getting any younger.. Killer piece.

  • 1 week ago

    by Poetess

    "And last dance with you forever"

    That line made me read everything differently. I think sometimes we don't realize just how fast time slips by until there are no more last dances.

  • 1 week ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Wow Ben. This is wow.. i guess we all have a moment where we look at someone and start to wish we could freeze time with them.. well done on this piece

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