Comments : Breathing

  • 7 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Its always good to get rid of people like this Brenda.. Im glad you left them behind and moved on :)

    Well done on a fantastic write..

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Nams, true that! I am in SO much better place now.

  • 7 months ago

    by ddavidd

    It is so interesting how poetically you loved the reasons of your suffocations!!

  • 7 months ago

    by Phil

    This is excellent and glad you're in a much Better place.

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you Phil, so much better place Indeed!

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Well done, Brenda. This is another raw piece from you, gritty and honest, and although it is certainly sad to read what you have suffered, it is inspirational to know that you came out fighting and were happy in the end.

    All the very best as ever,

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Ben, thank you so much. Some times you have to go through the fire to come out in a better place. Hugs-

  • 7 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Brenda

    A breath of fresh air... powerful and great write

    Michael :)

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Michael, thank you so much. Thankfully I no longer have to deal with this man.

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Brenda a lovely visual and emotional piece. Im really glad you are free and able to breath life again. Too many people never have the strength to break free x

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Thank you so much Milly . It is true, so many never break away from those toxic relationships. I wish I had done it earlier but at least I did it eventually. Hugs!

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    Brenda, this is such an incredibly raw and powerful write, and I'm truly glad you are no longer in that situation and can breathe again. Much love to you!

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, thank you so much. I really appreciate your support and love. I too am so thankful I no longer am married to this man. He truly has the ability to pull the very air from a room. Hugs my friend!

  • 7 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Raw & powerful write & very familiar subject matter- thank you for sharing x

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you, it's unfortunate that too many of us have gone through this-hugs!

  • 7 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Breda this is one he'll of a powerful write, I think this is such of a relatable piece, most of us have seen this type of relationship at one point or another, some of us more than once, very raw and honest write from you thanks for sharing

    Ben

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Ben, thank you so much. The only plus this relationship I had with him is my two daughters. They were always and still are my saving grace in dealing with that time in my life. Thankfully I am now married to a wonderful man and I'm in such a better place. The planets have aligned...:)

  • 7 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Brenda - this is so well written. I can relate as sadly a lot of people can, to a relationship that literally sucks the air out of every day, suffocating all the joyous things in life.

    Well done and thank you for sharing such raw emotion.

    Angie

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Angie, thank you so much for your wonderful comments. It is pretty sad to.think that so many of us have gone through this. Hugs to you-

  • 7 months ago

    by Hope2932

    Wonderfully written. Tells the reality of a poisonous relationship

    • 7 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much. I appreciate your kind comments-

  • 6 months ago

    by Poetess

    I'm glad you were able to leave such a toxic relationship and have found happiness.

    Just a small thing I hope you don't mind me pointing out- the first and last lines, "breath" should be changed to "breathe".

    Thank you for sharing this <3

    • 6 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you so much. Also for catching the typos, I appreciate that greatly.

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Brenda, this is so strong and lovely. Excellent write! I adore this.

    • 5 months ago

      by Brenda

      Thank you! I am so glad I no longer I have to deal with this man.