Comments : Will You Stir If I Write You A Sonnet?

  • 7 months ago

    by Phil

    This is astounding work!!!

    • 7 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks, Phil. It's actually one I wrote a year ago or so but I edited it and messed around with it a bit and reposted.

  • 7 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Nicely penned story Ben.
    PPx

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, damn man, love This! I remember parts of this from before but I really like the rewrites. Very nice!

  • 7 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    You win!

    You are the sonnet king! Whooooooot

    Ben,
    You always bring your sonnets to life.....Flipping tippleishous!

  • 7 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Wonderful as ever. I wish I had a quarter of your talent. Your sonnets are so full of imagery emotion and depth that I never tire of reading them x

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    A song and a story within this sonnet makes the read more
    emotional and it pulls the reader into that scene which the writer
    himself is in..if that made sense. Excellent!

  • 7 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    More deep stuff that excites the gray matter, may also be one of your longest, you ooze talent like that old maple tree oozes syrup. Very easy to envy you, excellent write, looks like a win, added to Favorites!

    Ken

    • 7 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks Ken - your comments always amuse me.

  • 7 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Benny ,
    I think i remember reading this last year... I may be wrong.. Your writing always amazes me.. I always think that im prepared to read your art, then BAM, you come out with stuff like this..

    Well done... xx

  • 7 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Ben
    Simply fabulous write

    Michael :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Poetess

    I love this. I've read it a few times already and I just want to keep reading. A sad story, but a beautiful piece.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thank you for your time, everyone

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    Incredible write, Ben...and in need of a |love button|for sure! Amazing job!

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Hi Ben. You are truly one of the best poets in the world. This poem is extravagantly creative, full of emotions, full of your incredible skill in making words come true.

    • 7 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      Thanks so much for your time and praise; it means a lot to hear words like that, however untrue!

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    Well if you write it like this then I shall... Beautiful !!