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This is astounding work!!!
by Ben Pickard
Thanks, Phil. It's actually one I wrote a year ago or so but I edited it and messed around with it a bit and reposted.
by Pagan Paul
Nicely penned story Ben.
Ben, damn man, love This! I remember parts of this from before but I really like the rewrites. Very nice!
by Maple Tree
You are the sonnet king! Whooooooot
You always bring your sonnets to life.....Flipping tippleishous!
by Milly Hayward
Wonderful as ever. I wish I had a quarter of your talent. Your sonnets are so full of imagery emotion and depth that I never tire of reading them x
Thanks for your time everyone
by Meena Krish
A song and a story within this sonnet makes the read more
emotional and it pulls the reader into that scene which the writer
himself is in..if that made sense. Excellent!
by CRAFTY KEN
More deep stuff that excites the gray matter, may also be one of your longest, you ooze talent like that old maple tree oozes syrup. Very easy to envy you, excellent write, looks like a win, added to Favorites!
Thanks Ken - your comments always amuse me.
I think i remember reading this last year... I may be wrong.. Your writing always amazes me.. I always think that im prepared to read your art, then BAM, you come out with stuff like this..
Well done... xx
Simply fabulous write
I love this. I've read it a few times already and I just want to keep reading. A sad story, but a beautiful piece.
Thank you for your time, everyone
Incredible write, Ben...and in need of a |love button|for sure! Amazing job!
Thanks, Ren. Stay well.
Hi Ben. You are truly one of the best poets in the world. This poem is extravagantly creative, full of emotions, full of your incredible skill in making words come true.
Thanks so much for your time and praise; it means a lot to hear words like that, however untrue!
Well if you write it like this then I shall... Beautiful !!