Comments : Wine That's Full Of Dregs

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Ben

    Love the title and the poem that follow

    Nice work

    Michael

  • 5 months ago

    by DarkLight

    Lovely piece.

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    A sad write Ben, but penned well.
    PPx

  • 5 months ago

    by Phil

    Straight into favourites!! Hopefully nominated.. Em would love this

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ben, such a sad beautiful write. I was totally immersed and totally bummed out at the same time. What the heck Ben??? LOL .Really wonderful write-

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    A beautiful piece that pulls at the heart and conjures such sadness. As akways you have a wonderful gift with words

  • 5 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Awe bennnnnn. This is heartbreaking and so so so relatable. But let me tell you something... never let someone else decide your happiness. It took me a long time to figure that out, and it's never easy. Unless you find happiness yourself, it may very well be almost impossible to find the light.
    There's always a way out of the dark, no matter what.
    -hugs
    BT

  • 5 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    Now I know..... I'm excited and saddened all at the same time Ben!

    Ugh.... Powerful, sad write dear man!

  • 5 months ago

    by ddavidd

    "Don't look for me on yonder hill,
    Nor hope to see me in the light;"

    How could one not to,
    your poetry is so bright!

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      I see what you did there! Thank you.

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    Another amazing, yet very sad, write, Ben! Much love and peace to you!

    • 5 months ago

      by Ben Pickard

      And the same to you, Ren. Take care

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    This is very sad and breaks my heart.. look </3 :(