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  • 7 months ago

    by tobias kinti

    this is great, thanks for posting!

  • 7 months ago

    by tobias kinti

    this is great, thanks for posting!

  • 7 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    We are a blink in the eye of time, here as keepers.
    Lets hope when we become extinct there is something left worth leaving.
    Nice write ether
    PPx

  • 7 months ago

    by Brenda

    Really well done-a lot of food for thought on what really is important in this life.

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A powerful piece that is a real slap in the face.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    Incredibly raw and powerful and filled with a very haunting truth. Well done!

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win! :)

  • 7 months ago

    by Phil

    Breathtakingly good

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Interestingly captivating and excellently penned! Liked the
    images that comes to the mind as I kept reading it..well done!
    Congrats on the win!

  • 5 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    A powerful poem of two parts. The first two stanza’s are quite bare and gritty and in your face, whereas the last softer and more personal, this adds immensely to the flavour of the piece. We have certainly transformed this planet to one of chaos, is there a glimmer of hope within your last stanza? I would like to think so… maybe not /…Great title, a really thought provoking read.