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by BlueJay May 2, 2017
Friendship, family /
Your ring doesn't fit me anymore,
I tried yesterday when I
was getting ready to go grocery shopping -
I just wanted some hope.
But it wouldn't fit, it's so hard to believe
I knew you so long ago that it's already
two sizes too small - at least.
Incredible, isn't it?
Instead of wearing it with "meep"
facing out, I considered putting it
on a chain and wearing it always,
but I think that ruins it.
So now here I am with it in my pocket,
heading out to for work and I keep
patting it with my bruised wrist -
just to make sure it's here
in your place.
by Pagan Paul
Its always nice to keep an audience guessing :)
Nicely penned Bluejay
A very moving piece, and wonderfully written. Great job!
Such a moving write.
All the best
I love the simplicity and sort of mystery in this. The reader can only guess about the ring and who it belongs to.
Thank you for sharing this.
by Ben Pickard
A story very well told with a moving ending. Personally, I would like to see a little more imagery from a free verse write, but that doesn't lesson the quality of this piece.
All the best,
by Maple Tree
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