Comments : In Your Place

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A story very well told with a moving ending. Personally, I would like to see a little more imagery from a free verse write, but that doesn't lesson the quality of this piece.

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 5 months ago

    by Poetess

    I love the simplicity and sort of mystery in this. The reader can only guess about the ring and who it belongs to.
    Thank you for sharing this.

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Bluejay

    Such a moving write.

    All the best

    Michael

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    A very moving piece, and wonderfully written. Great job!

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    Its always nice to keep an audience guessing :)
    Nicely penned Bluejay
    PPx