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  • 11 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A beautifully written piece, Jane, that certainly tugged at my heartstrings throughout.

    All the very best,

    Ben

  • 11 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Woah. What a heart wrenching but beautiful piece. I am almost utterly speechless...

    I'm here if you ever need anything.

    -BT

  • 11 months ago

    by Poetess

    My heart breaks whenever I read about your loss. It's never easy and I'm sorry :(

  • 10 months ago

    by Ben

    This is heart breaking and beautifully written.

    Great Job

    Ben

  • 10 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I didn't know what happened, but the longing you have to bring the person back to life is so strong that I feel it as I read through. This is such a sad poem.

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    This tore my heart apart alittle bit more on each read.

    Much love

  • 10 months ago

    by nourayasmine

    Heart-wrenching.