I agree with ddavidd about readers understanding this
write and yes its very deep and there are some ingrained
thoughts and feelings which the writer has left within these
10 months ago
This piece present a great modality . It is hard though for the reader to understand how powerful conceptually and poetically this piece ventures, if he/she is not, like me, familiar with the theme from the beginning. I hope in future you return and make the adjustment in this great work of yours.