Comments : Cracked Houses

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Damn Andrea, really liked this a lot. Your visuals are positively screaming. Well done -

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    A real Jeepers Creepers Andrea :)
    Fabulous writing

    Michael x

  • 5 months ago

    by Poetess

    I wish there was a love button. If this is about your job and what you do; you've written such a painful truth.

    • 5 months ago

      by Maple Tree

      Thank you...yes it's about my job,and my sweet people.

  • 5 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Other than the use of fall gracefully like fallen snow (that adverb repetition doesn't really suit you - in my opinion) this piece is beautiful as always and so painful to read. So glad this got nominated.

    Sorry for short note, I'll come back later and lengthen it!

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    This is a very powerful piece of poetry Lady Maple.
    Your frustration and pain scream from the words.
    Added to favourites :) Excellent poem.
    PPx

  • 5 months ago

    by Phil

    Wowzer

  • 5 months ago

    by ddavidd

    There are good poetry and there are sometimes master pieces like this. I do not totally grasp the meaning of this piece but I am bewildered from the sense of awe and the beauty of emotion, in this piece of art.

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Andrea

    Congrats on a great poem

    Michael :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    I’m sometimes hesitant to put pen to thoughts when interpreting another poets work, but through your strong visual imagery I see your social conscience shining through, and your desire to help those less fortunate only to be rejected. A strong well written poem from beginning to “I’m the enemy” which is a great way to end and for me defines the poem. well done!