Damn Andrea, really liked this a lot. Your visuals are positively screaming. Well done -

A real Jeepers Creepers Andrea :)
Fabulous writing

Michael x

I wish there was a love button. If this is about your job and what you do; you've written such a painful truth.

Other than the use of fall gracefully like fallen snow (that adverb repetition doesn't really suit you - in my opinion) this piece is beautiful as always and so painful to read. So glad this got nominated.

Sorry for short note, I'll come back later and lengthen it!

This is a very powerful piece of poetry Lady Maple.
Your frustration and pain scream from the words.
Added to favourites :) Excellent poem.
PPx

Wowzer

There are good poetry and there are sometimes master pieces like this. I do not totally grasp the meaning of this piece but I am bewildered from the sense of awe and the beauty of emotion, in this piece of art.

Hi Andrea

Congrats on a great poem

Michael :)

Judging comment

I’m sometimes hesitant to put pen to thoughts when interpreting another poets work, but through your strong visual imagery I see your social conscience shining through, and your desire to help those less fortunate only to be rejected. A strong well written poem from beginning to “I’m the enemy” which is a great way to end and for me defines the poem. well done!