Other than the use of fall gracefully like fallen snow (that adverb repetition doesn't really suit you - in my opinion) this piece is beautiful as always and so painful to read. So glad this got nominated.
Sorry for short note, I'll come back later and lengthen it!
11 months ago
by Pagan Paul
This is a very powerful piece of poetry Lady Maple.
Your frustration and pain scream from the words.
Added to favourites :) Excellent poem.
There are good poetry and there are sometimes master pieces like this. I do not totally grasp the meaning of this piece but I am bewildered from the sense of awe and the beauty of emotion, in this piece of art.
I’m sometimes hesitant to put pen to thoughts when interpreting another poets work, but through your strong visual imagery I see your social conscience shining through, and your desire to help those less fortunate only to be rejected. A strong well written poem from beginning to “I’m the enemy” which is a great way to end and for me defines the poem. well done!