Comments : Rebirthing the Tempest

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Beautiful, Maddy - genuinely.
    To be honest (and I know this is a personal thing) I'm not sure if I find the line breaks distracting or not. I've experimented with a few of those myself and never been convinced either way! They certainly go a long way to make writing more 'palatable' as I know blocks of writing can be daunting to some readers.
    Anyway, as above, lovely stuff. Take care,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Love is poetry - beautifully conveyed. I agree with Ben the line breaks do help make it more visually easy to read than blocks of text

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    I like how simple, honest and wonderful your pieces are.