Comments : For goodness sake

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A wonderfully written and very poignant piece considering these rather depressing times we live in.

    All the best, Michael.

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben.

      And yes freshly written today in light of very recent and very sad events

  • 6 months ago

    by Phil

    A wonderful piece full of sad truths

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Phil.

      And yes it is unfortunately

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is a fantastic piece of work and it rings very true and is so poignant at this time.

    Regards

    Craig

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Craig :)
      And yes sadly it does

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Very powerful and I absolutely love the wording of this. So very true. Well done-

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Brenda for your lovely comments :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Extremely powerful and very well written, as always, Michael! Amazing write!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Hey Ren
      Thank you so much :)

  • 6 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    I agree with Rem. This is truly so powerful. I totally love the last verse. I can feel your poetry growing. Well done! Loved this.

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Angela

      Lovely to see your complimentary words :)

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Very nice Michael. This piece smells like fresh wound.

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thanks fella

      Yes your senses are spot on Frank

  • 6 months ago

    by CRAFTY KEN

    It is a masterpiece Michael, in it you nicely packed just about all of the World's cares. It's a call to the Creator of us all to right the many wrongs we see and to secure our friends and families. It deserves a "Win" for sure! Added it to my Favorites.

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Ken,
    Such lovely lovely words and it is that exactly fella.
    A beautiful world, but such a brutal sadness for all humanity of the inhumane sickness

    Peace and love to you and all :)

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is a great piece, reflecting your concern for the family in awareness of what's going on with the world. Creatively done too. Congrats on the win, Michael!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Mossgirl

      That's lovely words :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats Michael!! :D it made me so happy to see this on the front page today!

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Hi Ren

      Thank you that's very sweet. Well done to you too on your HM :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    Omg

    • 6 months ago

      by Michael

      Omg Em that's a compliment I will take graciously. :) thank you

  • 3 months ago

    by Lucifer

    Michael, no one in this world is happy with the things going on.
    Do you think Bill gates or Mark juckerberg are happy?
    No, because they want the things happen in this world according to them which they can't do, they know this.

    Of course they are rich, they can control economies, but not natural calamities or the other actions of God which you mentioned in the end.

    Even, I find myself upset with papa(God) about certain things which happens around me. But he never answer to anyone.
    I know his ways of doing things hurt us, but sometimes it brings us closer too.

    And he has left an option for us to understand why he does this or that; it's called enlightment. But it's a very tough path to choose.

    enlight yourself and become one with the creator to see what he is seeing and why he is doing.

    And I am sorry, if I have offended you with my comment.

    Love and light!

    • 3 months ago

      by Michael

      Mr L
      No offence taken at all...
      Everyone of us has an opinion and perspective in life, and this is our human right. I see a world in trouble, and for sure the powers of this earth, do not help somewhat. And yes the unknown forces have been naturally occurring for endless years. But faiths are strained because of all the mess in our world, and it does feel like we have little help