Comments : My Demon King

  • 4 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Angela

    Very good write indeed

    Michael :)

  • 4 months ago

    by AngelaLuisaCory

    Thank you Michael

    Hope you are well. Really appreciate your vote and your comment.

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Wow another fantastic write..

    'I'm not as strong as you believe
    I wear my heart upon my sleeve.' << me down to a tee!!

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I have read this before and liked it but for some reason my comments hadn't registered. So a quick reminise. Another wonderful piece. I've in particular the lines...

    I'm not as strong as you believe
    I wear my heart upon my sleeve
    So where are you my Demon king
    Who tried to clip this spirits wing

    Vivid imagery and strong emotion I could even see you writing a short story as spin off from this. Milly x

  • 1 month ago

    by Lucas Woods

    Before thou I stand...
    These demon wings shall shelter thee.