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  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is brilliant in its honesty. It hits the reader very much like a bomb and square between the eyes.

    Well done on this.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is awesome! So many things you cannot do but what you can do is bombastic. I agree with you on that I believe that a poem is as powerful as a bomb or even more. Great write!