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This is truly amazing
'Just like a bullet in mid-shot
We cannot take it back'.
by Ben Pickard
I suppose this could almost be a sequel to 'The Fall'.
Words really do have a lot of power. Unfortunately, human beings have never excelled in being moderate with it, have they?
Thank you guys for taking the time to read and comment :) y'all are always much appreciated!
Solid wording and strong message.
Thank you, Frank!
This reminded me of cyber bullying and "A Girl Like Her" movie. Very true. Words can hurt and cause a person to end their life or cause them to go mad.
What a strong and true message Ren!
Thank you love :)
Ren, so very true. Words are one of those things you cannot take back and can have lasting effects good and bad. You really nailed it with this, we'll done-
Thank you very much, Brenda!! :)
Love this, people often underestimate the power of words, truly, they can be our best friend or worst enemy.Great write!
Thank you so much Ben :)
I love how it seems like every word in the piece has immense importance because of the way it's set up.... and it works great to accentuate the theme of the poem... great work, and added to favorites!
Wow thank you so much! I truly appreciate that :)
by Mortal Utopia
Such a powerful poem... I really like it!
Thank you very much! :)
by Maple Tree
The Older I get, the more I lose my word filter
and I tend to say things that I probably shouldnt say
but I do....
this poem truly touched me in many ways Ren,
thank you for sharing!
Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Andrea :)