Comments : One word...

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Ren

    This is truly amazing

    'Just like a bullet in mid-shot

    We cannot take it back'.

    Incredible line

    Michael x

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ren,

    I suppose this could almost be a sequel to 'The Fall'.
    Words really do have a lot of power. Unfortunately, human beings have never excelled in being moderate with it, have they?

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by Phil

    Wow

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Thank you guys for taking the time to read and comment :) y'all are always much appreciated!

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Solid wording and strong message.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you, Frank!

  • 6 months ago

    by nani

    This reminded me of cyber bullying and "A Girl Like Her" movie. Very true. Words can hurt and cause a person to end their life or cause them to go mad.
    What a strong and true message Ren!

    Nani

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you love :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, so very true. Words are one of those things you cannot take back and can have lasting effects good and bad. You really nailed it with this, we'll done-

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much, Brenda!! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben

    Love this, people often underestimate the power of words, truly, they can be our best friend or worst enemy.

    Great write!

    Ben

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much Ben :)

  • 6 months ago

    by ROAM

    I love how it seems like every word in the piece has immense importance because of the way it's set up.... and it works great to accentuate the theme of the poem... great work, and added to favorites!

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Wow thank you so much! I truly appreciate that :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Mortal Utopia

    Such a powerful poem... I really like it!

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you very much! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Maple Tree

    The Older I get, the more I lose my word filter
    and I tend to say things that I probably shouldnt say
    but I do....

    this poem truly touched me in many ways Ren,
    thank you for sharing!

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting, Andrea :)