Vanishing point

by DarkLight   May 28, 2017


We never met nor did we knew each other
yet your departure left me desperate for your audience.
They will cry for you
but I will keep on the smile
for when I wake up
my dream will be just a scary nightmare.
Brother,
May our paths cross as we travel to the next world

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  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    Skanky. This is beautifully done but the ending was a real kick in the teeth.

    The title drew me in and the content didn't disappoint..

    We never met nor did we knew each other
    yet your departure left me desperate for your audience.
    ^^
    It really strange (in a nice way) that even though you never met this person you hold them in your heart and their passing broke you and you felt you were meant to look after this person's family.

    They will cry for you
    but I will keep on the smile
    for when I wake up
    my dream will be just a scary nightmare.
    ^^
    Sometimes we have to hold our heads high and just keep going. Grief affects us all in different ways.

    Brother,
    May our paths cross as we travel to the next world
    ^^
    This really was a hard hitting ending.

    Much love.
    Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This left me cold at the end. A stunning write.

    All the best,

    Ben