Intertwined

by Alec   May 30, 2017


Heavily breathing bodies
Twisting intertwined
A handful of her hair
Inhibitions left behind

Tongues dance delightfuly
She leaves scratches on my back
Lost in pleasure I bite down
For its my turn to attack

Roll around and pin her down
Her eyes pull me in
We fool around, moans abound
Sweet music as we sin

Writhing, wicked words
Flow from my dirty mouth
Gently she grabs my hair
And forces my face down south

Our lips caress and meet
I see her claw the sheets
I know my work is done
With the curling of her feet

With a gasp I resurface
Forgetting my need for air
And all I see before me...
Your seductive sultry stare

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  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Very well rhymed and written but I have to say they need to come with a warning of lol ;)

  • 4 months ago

    by Tony

    Yeah... I have no idea how to go there. In poetry... before you start writing another poem and we go at it for another few hours. Don't worry, Alec is NOT shy. Be careful Ren, he may use your poems against you!

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Well she did make me want to challenge her Neverland with Wonderland. And good catch Tony... I gots innuendos for dayz.

      And If you came out of your propper all the time, militarty stick up the butt mentality, you might just be able to cut loose a bit. Wait its not Navy right? Because if it is. Pun intended!

      On the real though, thanks for your service bro and hope you enjoyed your Memorial Day, sorry you couldn't spend it with the fam.

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      Army. And thanks... I think. How did we grow up in bordering states and never meet? Your ego has its own gravity well. Collab on Wonderland?

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Hell no I call dibbs on Wonderland! You can have Oz, write some stuff about the tin man without a heart, right up your alley bro. Leave the bong smoking caterpiller, crazy cat, and shrooms to the professionals ; )

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      ... for the first time in a long time I literally have no words

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      I win

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      No. I'm taking a tactical pause. I need sleep. Don't you have a job?

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Yes I do, and like a responsible adult I'm only responding when no one is looking

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      How do you even post collaborations on this site?

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Not here to get in the middle of anything, boys, but I'd love to see a Wonderland piece and/or Oz...that'd be amazing! Good luck with y'alls collab if and when you do it :) I'm not 100% sure how to do collaborations. I know when you go to post a new poem there is a section to put the other authors name...I think? And since I'm obviously a wealth of information, lol, I'll leave y'all to it.

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    Damn. This is an exceptionally well written piece with flawless rhyming and deep sensual emotions throughout. Amazing job! Keep it up and welcome to the site :)

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Thanks for the time you took to read. I am a huge fan of peter pan by the way and I loved the poem you wrote. I was a bit of a lost boy growing up (who wasn't).

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much :)

  • 4 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Nice write!! This kind of topic is such a hard thing to capture, at least for me. But you've managed to do it with such ease. Keep writing!

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Think about what you want to say, and pretend no one will ever read it. Put yourself in the moment and let your pen do the rest. Don't worry about making people uncomfortable, tell the truth as you see it. Don't apologize after.

    • 4 months ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Good advice. Though I must ask, was this just a write off the top of your head or meant for someone special? Seeing as most of my writing is usually written in the moment, I'm Not sure how to wing it.

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Top of the head. Call it a day dream. I gave up long ago on finding ''the one.'' No I'm out to find as much fun as I can, wherever and with whomever. If I find that special someone along the way cool. If not, I've got enough memories to last a lifetime.

    • 4 months ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      Well done for a top of the head write. That's spectacular

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      You have no idea...

    • 4 months ago

      by Beautiful Tragedy

      No idea on... your head writes? Lol.

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      No idea on how he comes up with stuff on the fly. He and I have been going back and forth for quite a bit. Literally came up with a poem to rebut one of mine on the spot lol. It was a lot of fun.

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