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by Alec May 30, 2017
Love, romance /
Little hints have happened here
You're breathing changes when I'm near
You shiver with whispers in your ear
''Let me make my intentions clear''
I run my fingers through your hair
Bait the trap and set the snare
The flicker of fire begins to flare
Tonight at least the perfect pair
Contrived seduction so connived
At the main event we've arrived
Your eyes are suddenly so alive
Who am I to so deprive?
Cocktail dress flutters to the floor
Behind a locked bedroom door
''Duerme conmigo mi amor''
My latin princess begs for more
We come together in sweet embrace
Pure ecstasy plain upon her face
A night of silky satin lace
A sexy slow and steady race
Again so beautiful! I'm seduced by your words!
This was written well with fluent rhyming... Hey but you know that already right?? I am blown away by your work and the fact that you write it so elegantly !!
But its always nice to hear from someone else ; )
Thank you. Its always my goal to tell a story or make a point in my writing. I don't use complicated metaphors or similies because they tend to get lost in translation. I stick to the literal. And of course, I love consonence, rhythm, and rhyme.
Well done. I knew what the Spanish phrase means! Welcome to this site. Beautifully written, sexy and evocative. I really enjoyed reading this.
Should have posted this earlier, "Duerme conmigo mi amor" translates to "sleep with me my love."
Welcome to PnQ and you certainly kick the effing door in with this write, structure and word choice are spot on and this flows like a mo'fo.Great Job.Ben
Lol, thanks bro. Thats the plan.
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