Comments : Nightmare in Oz

  • 4 months ago

    by Tony

    A very special thank you to Ren for taking me to "Neverland," and Alec for his darkly twisted "Wonderland."

    To everyone else, welcome to my Nightmare in Oz

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      Woah... mine was a SATIRE, with a dark twist at the END. This is something else entirely. I'm impressed. I didn't know you had this in you.

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      <3
      Well I may have taken y'all on a quick trip...but you two took me to a whole other world with your amazing writes. I am so impressed! You guys are awesome!

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      Don't sell yourself short!

      Now, where should we journey to next week?

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      Oh I'd be very interested to hear any ideas lol

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      Dreamlands (H. P. Lovecraft), Shangri-La
      (James Hilton), Narnia (C. S. Lewis), Utopia
      (St Thomas More), Gulliver’s World
      (Jonathan Swift), Middle-Earth
      (J. R. R. Tolkien), Pern (Anne McCaffrey), Avalon, Atlantis... and those are just literary worlds

    • 4 months ago

      by Alec

      I take it you read a lot...

    • 4 months ago

      by Ren

      ^^ lol

      LOVE Lord of The Rings though

  • 4 months ago

    by Alec

    HOLY F-ING (insert a line of explicatives HERE)! What dark friggen hole did this thing crawl out of and where did you hide the key?!?! I figured you'd come out with five stanzas about the tinman without a heart?!

    DUDE! This. Was. Awesome.

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      I'm good at compartmentalization. I just poked a hole in the wall, and this is where it took me. You did tell me to "cut loose."

      ; D

  • 4 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Whew! This was bloody! A nightmare indeed! Awesome would fall short for a description of this bloody piece. Maybe awesome to the fifth level? As in WOW, Tony!

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      Thank you! I couldn't stop writing, I haven't written anything this long in a very long time

  • 4 months ago

    by Brenda

    Tony, I don't think I want to travel this nightmare with you, wow! A whole new twist to the yellow brick road. Well done -

  • 4 months ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Nominated.

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      Thank you for the nomination, it means a lot to me.

  • 4 months ago

    by Ren

    YES YES YES!! :D Damn Tony!! This is freaking beyond words right now! I mean...holy cow!! Freaking Amazing!!! I had chills from the first line and was completely enthralled through the entire read!!! So dark and graphic and absolutely breathtaking and exciting (course what that says about me I'm not so sure lol) wooo....I need to go calm down now haha. And SUPER excited to see this nominated! |LOVE BUTTON TO THE MAX|

    • 4 months ago

      by Tony

      Thank you for the inspiration lol. Been in a dark place lately... my deployment got extended. Just want to go home.

    • 4 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Waah. I feel you, Ren! I couldn't calm down when I read this yesterday. And yehey to the nomination. Cheer up, Tony!

  • 4 months ago

    by Em

    Fan bloody tastic!!! I was gripped from start to finish, wow!!