Untitled, June 2, 2017

by Everlasting   Jun 2, 2017

Every night,
I swam in waves of dreams
that came to me
while I dove deep into sleep

These dreams were gentle
but sometimes turbulent

( they sank my will )

I submerged in fantasy
and forgot to breath in :

the reality

that they were just


And so I swam,
until I almost drown to my wake;
grasping for air!


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  • 1 year ago

    by Darren

    Seems like an eternity since I last commented on one of your poems, I have been such a slacker recently.

    This poem is right up my street, a dreamy head swimming poem.
    Gets you thinking as well.

    Nice write

    (apologies for crap comment, probably why I slacked in the first place...)

    • 1 year ago

      by Everlasting

      Thank you Darren. No worries. It happens. I haven't been commenting either. I'm barely writing as well. I also like your comment. Thanks again.

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    I do the same sometimes! You captured here what I also go through! Great write.