A romantic poem of yearning extremely well penned. To my mind you are becoming one of the more accomplished poets on this site. Your use and knowledge of the English language is evident to all. There is good imagery, stanza’s are well constructed and contain some great lines. The use of “twitched” in the second stanza comes to mind, loved that!
A breath of fresh air has so much sadness and pain.
The words are so soothing to read and then move from one verse
to the other smoothly making it such a lovely read but within this
sadness lives and breathes...touching write.