nice phrace

I see you have been on a senryu 'splurge' and long may it continue when they come out like this! You really have this form mastered from what I've read so far. Three nice, crisp lines, each separate from the rest and very individual. Something so simple as a shift to the right from an 'old clock' and time is gone forever. I like the adjective 'old' there when describing the clock...even that cannot escape the far-reaching hands of the very thing it displays.

Excellent and nominated.

I am really pleased this has been nominated. The hands of time stop for no man, woman or child unfortunately!

A very nice Senryu, lots of food for thought in just a few words. Well done-

I love this! Excellent job!

Starkly simple but creating many thoughts for my gray matter! Glad that for you I can flatter!
Great work.