Unwanted Solitude (Tanka)

by mossgirl19   Jun 7, 2017

Your presence consumed
The love I have gently weaned
But you are wrong to
Think that your absence is the
Kind of solitude I seek.


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  • 9 months ago

    by Lvi

    This is amazing!
    The piece is filled with waves of emotions...it's beautiful.

  • 9 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Syllable count: correct. Subject matter: spot on. Another great formed write from you.

    All the best,


    • 9 months ago

      by mossgirl19

      Thank you, Ben! What a sweet comment this is. Lvi, thanks a lot! And Gopi thanks for taking the time to read and comment.

  • 9 months ago

    by gopi nath

    nice one

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