A So-Called Poem

by RustySoul   Jun 10, 2017


I verbed a noun,
Added commas, here and there,
To make a, pause.
Made extensive use of adjectived words
To add richness to the language.
And nouns played the role of verbs.
Not content, I made use of hyphens
In not-so-appealing sentences
The apostrophes' use was limited though.
I was not sure where to use colon
Or semi colon: pardon if wrong one is chosen.
Having done so I finally questioned myself
Will anybody like this?
Just then my heart exclaimed, Damn!
This is such a good piece.
I still remember the words people used to say,
"You cannot write".
But whatever it is I jot down
It is my work
And I am proud of it. Period.

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  • 6 years ago

    by Mini

    Simply wow!!

    - Mini :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ren

    I agree, this is awesome!

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    You should be, you bloody nailed it! AWESOME.

    • 6 years ago

      by RustySoul

      Thank you. Regards, Rusty.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    And so you bloody Well should be!! <3

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