Moon

by gopi nath   Jun 11, 2017


In the dark I seen a white light
It filled my heart with bright light
In the hardships I go through the darkest noon,
In the happiness I see you as a cresent moon

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  • 6 years ago

    by Sai

    The last line was quite sweet.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I think this is really sweet but just a suggestion as you used light twice for the rhyme I feel it's a little forced.. how about for the second line "it filled my heart with much delight"

    Em

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A short piece that made me smile. Love the moon. Nice one.

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