Comments : Moon

  • 6 years ago

    by mossgirl19

    A short piece that made me smile. Love the moon. Nice one.

  • 6 years ago

    by Em

    I think this is really sweet but just a suggestion as you used light twice for the rhyme I feel it's a little forced.. how about for the second line "it filled my heart with much delight"

    Em

  • 6 years ago

    by Sai

    The last line was quite sweet.